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[captainlead]

[SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/captain5/david-guetta-without-you[/SOUNDCLOUD]

[DylanVasey]

I think I'd prefer the instrumental better ha. The vocals are not gelling that well.

The actual production part of it though is great.

[Mauro Ericsson]

I must agree the production quality is top notch but there's just somethiing that leaves it a bit empty for me.

[Thr33]

Hmmm your grid is off... i think you must have (for reasons unknown) added an extra bar at the beginning. At your tempo, the first drop should break start at 1:00.

Personally i think you've tried adding too many different styles here. You've got the Major Lazer style kick sequence, LMFAO style dutch synth and then the trance/pop style at the first big lift.

If your going for that minimal breaks kick sequence then the dutch synth definitely wont work with it plus with the vocals over-lapping its too much. Have a listen to a R3hab remix and see how he differenciates his stems. Also maybe think about kicking in with the vocals at the 1:00 break instead of at 0.30 like a radio edit would, theres not enough going on for the vocals to fit well there.

I think the trance/pop style fits well, maybe think about that. Just some advice and feedback, hope it was helpful.