sounds good to me mate, i like how the lead comes in and i like the way youve put the vocals in, the only thing i personally would have changed would be the hats around 1.30, i would have cut them out there and left them out for the next break down after that, then brought them back at about 2.05,

and if it was a loop that you used im not sure i would have maybe added a parametric eq and took out the highs for that part, but every producer has there own ways i suppose :P

overall though sounding good mate.