Hey..
I'm new in this forum and this is my first work, after 6 Month of experience
http://www49.zippyshare.com/v/77687996/file.html
Would like to hear your suggestions
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23-09-2010 #1
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Lacuna - Celebrate the Summer (Ciamont Hands Up Remix)
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23-09-2010 #2
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0:40 i would change the bell sound to a arpegged chord also the vocals or bass seems to be out of tune at 1:52 i was expecting some awesome but it turned out to be to plain you need to add something else there.
not trying to be negative or anything but i thought i'd be best to just be honest.
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0:40 is not a bell, just a high synth from v-Station. Hm i don't really like arpegged sounds :/
Hm I don't know whats wrong with the bass is wrong at 1:52..There is the Mainpart with melody, the melody fits to the bassline, i used the fitting basic notes from the bassline. Don't know whats wrong there...
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Yeah i respect your opinion, all others heard the song just said 'awesome track, amazing or something like that, and youre the first one saying critics. I already wondered why nobody mentioned some improvements :D
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