Showcase & Promotion

[ravenslament]

selfish promotion time check out my trax at soundcloud and reverbnation . you may love 'em you may hate them , go check 'em out you will never know

[ravenslament]

sorry sunny here are the links to two of my profiles - www.reverbnation.com/ravenslament and www.soundcloud.com/ravenslament . hope you enjoy

[icecoolz]

I checked out smells like teen spirit and a couple of others. I like your experimentation and swaying away from the classic 4/8 beat scenario. Just observed a couple of things. Too many elements are present in your songs. It makes it tough to differentiate what is what and sounds way too messy and makes it very difficult to understand the sounds. The vocals idea is good but it needs to fit somewhere and has to have a sense of rhythm. I specially felt this in Smells like teen spirit. The Do you really want to hurt me, was something which was again, with a good rythm, but too many elements. Gets very confusing. These are just my views btw :)

[ravenslament]

thanx for the feedback icecoolz its much appreciated , i will take these points into consideration when doing future trax . this busy element is something i know i have to address , a few people have mentioned this to me on a few trax i have previously done. a point i have to remember is minimalism means more . thanx again

[ravenslament]

thanx sunny all feedback is positive in my opinion , how else do we learn ? anyway thats what these forums are for aren't they

[ravenslament]

i've removed the smells ... track had a relisten and understand where the problem was , it just wasn't in time at all . i wonder how that one got passed me . must be gettin old

[ravenslament]

thanx sunny , tell me if you think any of the others are as well .

[Snakefingers13]

They still have that arrhythmic feel to them, but in some parts it sounds good. The Smells Like Teen Spirit remix was excellent in some parts, just not so good in others.

For example, at about 2:05 in 'Do You Really Want To Hurt Me', it gets really good, then the busy pattern maybe 15 seconds later makes it sound a little out of time.

[ravenslament]

nice one snake.. , i will have to rectify this and put up the re-edit . thanx again

[ravenslament]

an update some new tracks added to www.soundcloud.com/ravenslament