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  1. 22-04-2010  #1

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    Exclamation owl city- fireflies (griersondo remix)


    heres a little remix im workin on
    not my usual genre but what the hell
    its wierd iv made it slower bt faster at the same time lol
    have a listen u will know what i mean
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    [SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/ericgrierson/owl-city-fireflies-griersondo-remix[/SOUNDCLOUD]

    new final version took on board all comments what ya think?
    i love it
    [SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/ericgrierson/griersondo-fireflies[/SOUNDCLOUD]
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    Nice sequence. I think it might help break it up if ya took the bass out of the 5th bar where the fireflies synth starts, then maybe bring it back in 2 or 4 bars later with a progressive sweep with the big kick. As the vocals are slower maybe try adding some reverb and delay to the last 2 syllables to add some ambience, might give it a more busy feel.


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  3. 22-04-2010  #3

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    cheers mate im on a mission.
    i think there's something there
    will work on it

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    i definitely agree that you've got something worth finishing. u no me, i like defiance, big breaks and something that gives me ups, downs and great sequencing.


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    I think this is an awesome remix. I know I'm supposed to give some critique, but I can't really come up with something that would make it better. Maybe like TopFloorDjs said, to add some ambiance to the vox, making it more magical in a way.

    Keep on going! :)

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    final version up

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    i like this, i like the way the vocals have been slowed down, and i think they go well with what you've created there, i also like how you've re-created the lead to sound like the original song.

    good stuff :)

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    This is damn good man! :D
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