Mike Guad - Live your dreams

Mike, nice construction, however the song lacks is a depth, perhaps it needs a pad to play along with the main tune. And also needs some variation to the song. The kick needs to be a bit more powerful. I am not sure if you added some reverb to it, but it sounds like its a kick drum in a big room and its getting drowned in it. You need to bring the kick drum out. There is a monotony which needs to be broken. You have a good start but can use the above stuff I mentioned. Keep it going!